University of California Demonstrate Mastery in Interpreting the Poem Discussion

I’m working on a english question and need a sample draft to help me study.

Here are the peer review questions

1. What is the main impression? What appear to be the strongest and weakest features?

1. Is the thesis clear? Does it seem too obvious or implausible? Explain.

1. Does the author support the thesis well?

1. Are the ideas expressed in the optimal order?

1. Does the draft contradict itself or repeat itself?

1. Are all the paragraphs well organized and succinct?

1. Look again at the opening and closing paragraphs. Do they arouse a sense of curiosity and lend a sense of completion?

1. Mark errors of spelling and usage.

1. Comment on the appropriateness of the title.

1. What are your concluding thoughts?