University of Michigan Is College Degree Worth It Essay
Question Description
See attached file, this is my original paper, need to revision based on my draft paper.
Here is the requirement:
Essay 1.2 is a revision of Essay 1.1 based on your own rethinking, taking into account comments you receive from readers. Essay 1.2 presents a question at issue in an introduction that makes the case for its being important to the discourse community. Body paragraphs will show how the question could be answered differently and bring at least 2 of the articles we read about university education to support the different responses to the question. The essay concludes by restating the question and stating your answer to it (one of the responses to the question) at the end.
Essays should be 3-4 pages, double-spaced, using a standard font. Cite the articles quoted in the essay using MLA, APA, or another citation style you are already familiar with. The Works Cited page is not included in the essay page total.
Here is my comment from my draft paper. “you have done good work with this first version of the essay. For the revision, I recommend bringing out your own description and analysis of the positions in response to the question at issue. This essay is more about describing a debate than presenting one side’s thesis in response. The revision does not need to focus so strongly on the readings we have done, but rather use them to illustrate or support your ideas. Let me know if you have questions.“
Essay 1, second version
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This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeIntroduction establishes the scope and importance of the question the essay will address. |
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25.0 pts |
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This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe essay is clear about for whom the question is at issue. |
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25.0 pts |
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This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe essay explains two different responses to the question in thorough detail. |
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100.0 pts |
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This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe essay quotes directly or references important ideas from at least two of the articles we read for this unit |
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25.0 pts |
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This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeDirect and indirect quotations introduce, quote, explain, and analyze the source material and cite the work using MLA, APA, or another citation style. |
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25.0 pts |
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This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe conclusion summarizes the question at issue in light of the paper’s analysis and states the thesis in response at the end. |
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25.0 pts |
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This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeEssay 1.2 is a substantial revision of Essay 1.1 that takes reader comments into account. |
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25.0 pts |
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Total Points: 250.0 |
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