RWS 305 SDSU Individual Health Problems Beyond Food Essay

1) Post your Mod 2 essay to your Group Discussion Board (next item below on this Module 2 task list). I will give you feedback on your essay as a comment in your gradebook.

2) Review just 1 essay for this Mod 2 peer review.
2) If an essay already has a review, review a different essay.
3) If there is no other essay with zero reviews, do a second review that incorporates the first review.
4) No essay should receive more than two reviews.
5) If you decide in your group to extend this exercise through Thursday (3/18), that is fine.
6) Use the same Workshop guide from Mod 1 – Workshop Worksheet_2018 (Links to an external site.) {or use SDSU log-in Collaborations <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HyfSF2c-xnNZOFbB-hzlfth7ym1IeuHz7fzXqKraJn4/edit?usp=sharing> Avoid bland yes/no answers. Instead, read the essay for how it works for the intended reader (SDSU kinesiology graduate students) and when you find a spot that needs work or a spot that works well – note it using the category term provided on the form. No need to copy the form to your reply post – you can make comments in sentences or paragraphs. For example, if coherence is rough in a place, note it.
7) You must post two times to this discussion board for Canvas to pick up your work. The first is to post your essay. The second is to post your review. If you choose to share your essay elsewhere, initiate a post to declare such with a link. Your written review should be posted as a reply to the essay/post you reviewed, not just a link to an external document.
8) This task will be worth 18 points total: 1 point for acknowledging these instructions below. 7 points for your peer review that provides thoughtful advice that enhances the quality of the M2 essay, plus 1-10 points for your draft to indicate your potential final grade.

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