ENGL 1A Contra Costa College Mod 6 Thesis Statement Discussion

I’m working on a english exercise and need a sample draft to help me understand better.

we have to read LIST 1 WOMEN: Maia Niguel Hoskin, “The Ugly Reality of Violent Misogyny in America is Systemic, Endemic, and Normalized” LIST2 WOMEN: Maia Niguel Hoskin, “The Ugly Reality of Violent Misogyny in America is Systemic, Endemic, and Normalized” LIST 3 ASIAN AMERICANS: Amy and write and argument essay

• a Thesis Statement appropriate to the essay assignment, and that follows the instructions in the essay prompt, the prompt explanation and skills to be learned, and the WAAE This prompt asks you to argue how various groups are marginalized and the effects on their lives.
• at least six (6) topic sentences that follow the instructions for topic sentences:
  • Two topic sentences each from LIST A, LIST B, and LIST C. The topic sentences must specify the group and specific form of marginalization (how it affects their lives).
  • See the pages on writing topic sentences in WAAE in module 6 and the prompt explanation and skills to be learned for this essay prompt
  • Thesis statement clearly states the argument for the essay in accordance with prompt instructions. Essay takes a position and does not set up a compare/contrast essay. Thesis Statement makes no reference to persons or articles that are to be used as evidence.10 pts
    This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeEach topic sentence clearly establishes a specific argument that (a) follows the instructions regarding use of LIST A, LIST B, and LIST C, (b) identifies the group and (c) makes a claim as to the form of marginalization and its effect on the group. The concluding topic sentence clearly responds with a “so what” to one of the forms of conclusion described in Module 6.30 pts
    This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThere are at least 6 topic sentences (2 each from LIST A, LIST B and LIST C) to establish the depth and scope of the argument as required by the prompt guidelines5 pts
    This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeOutline is clearly written, proofread and error free5 pts
    Total Points: 50