ENGL 120 SDSU Factors That Will Help a Person Surmount Obstacles Essay

I need help with my essay its already there written i just need to revise is and fix the required parts. I will attach a document with feedback highlighted if you click on the highlighted part it will tell you what to do or whats the problem.

NOTE : PLEASE USE MLA FORMAT DO NOT USE OUTSIDE WORK OR RESOURCE !!

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“Unfortunately you are not following the well directions at all. Needed to re-read our Timed Essay #1 Directions Pg 1-4 and use 2 support quotes from our class articles by Dweck in body 1, Colvin in body 2, and Davis in body 3, with no outside research at all. None of these are quotes from our class sources. Also needed thesis on mindset, practice, and mentors, with corresponding body topic sentences and body details to match. Also need to get into the habit of reading your work out loud 4 times before submitting so all of your word choice makes sense for your readers. Needed significant organization, sentence, quote details, MLA quote formatting, and Works Cited revision before submitting, but since this is our first major paper, you get to revise for up to 2 letter grades higher due Thurs. 3/18.”