Cal Poly Pomona Demographic Market Segmentation in Business Questions

I’m working on a marketing Research Paper and need guidance to help me learn.

This is a group project. After submitting it to the professor, the professor said that many things need to be fix.

She said for the Question 4.1, 4.2, 4.5 are “Heavy proof-read”. Which means “your work has several grammatical issues that should be fixed if you want to boost your grade. Grammatical issues include the use of incomplete sentences, poorly-written sentences, misuse or insufficient use of commas, misspelled words, etc.

As graduating business seniors, students are expected to be able to meet some standards in written communication.

With heavy proofread, you need to go beyond Grammarly because Grammarly does not identify poorly-written sentences. I suggest after your team finishes the content-related edits (answers to questions), each of the four of you reads the report once to fix the grammatical issues and finally run it through Grammarly as I have posted the instructions on BB.

So part 4 in the doc are my parts, need fixing on Question 4.1,4.2, 4.5