University of Nairobi Bullying and Youth Suicide Article Review Essay

Revise draft 1 of short literature review as comments below:

-Is there something weird going on with your margins? They should be 1 inch

-Your abstract should introduce the topic and outline your themes, instead of telling me that this paper combines the articles, tell me how.

-As it stands, you sort of have 3 mini article summaries instead of one cohesive lit review. I’m looking for comparisons, and parts of those articles that BUILD off of each other.

-Your real contribution in doing this lit review is in highlighting the themes you think are most important across the articles.Try to find two themes that all three of the articles touch on, and use those themes to organize your sections.

-What can you say about the two articles in the same sentence: “Article A and article B agree/compliment/support this same conclusion”. Your whole lit review should be built around the holistic knowledge you get from all the articles, not just scraps of information one at a time.

-Also, your reflection is much longer than it should be. The vast majority should be your synthesis of the topic and only two short paragraphs should be on what you learned.This is a good start and you show a good depth of understanding of your articles but it needs some adjustment to bring it into line with our expectations.

-The final draft should be around 1500 words