Santa Monica College A Good Man Is Hard to Find by Flanner OConnor Essay

First, rather than referring to an even from the story for each body paragraph, select and include a particular quotation (textual evidence). Next, note that your topic sentences contain different ideas relating to morality (each one of which could be a possible thesis) rather than sticking with and elaborating on the main idea of the thesis. If you’re truly interested in the idea that what people choose to practice is most important, then each body paragraph should relate to this specific point. Each body paragraph should deepen our idea of what you mean by that. In the thesis and throughout, can you clarify what you mean by “choose to practice”? And how does this issue of practicing (or behaving?) relate to one’s ideas of right and wrong? Do the two align or not necessarily? Why or why not?

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Revision for essay plan 1

Please look at the essay plan I have attached, and follow the revisions written up above. This is for the story “A good man is hard to find” , and essay plan is written out, and just need to take in consideration the feedback I got back.