Harvard University Cyber Security Articles and Academic Writing Analysis

i need you to revise my paper i have two essays and needs to be revised ,,, i have notes that well tell you whats needs to be done. Please see my comments on further in-text citations needed.

for the first essay unit one:: I have also suggested places for more examples from the Apple website. and i will upload a pdf off my essay with her comments on the stuff that needs to be fixed then i will upload word doc to fix it and revise it on what she said that needs to be done. also i will provide rubric UNIT 1 Apple

second essay::: For revision: Make your title page structure match your peer-reviewed article’s structure.?????

Include quotes from the articles you analyzed that show example of ethos and logos appeals in your results section.

Add in areas for future research for your own writing into the conclusion.

what is good writing in cyber security ,,,, genre analysis… ,, what you going to do in the future to apply what you learned in your writing.

Work site need to fixed the right way

i will upload the rubic for this unit 2 and follow it and fix what she said ^^^^^^