ENG 120 Cuyamaca College Engagement Party & Mutual Respect Brainstorming Essay

Pre-Writing: Brainstorming Essay about (engagement party)

• Hook
• Background Information: At the backyard at 6:00 pm we were celebrating with my family, cousin, and friends.
• Thesis Statement (what is the point of your story?) The purpose of my story, we learned that we were noisy that night. We should respect others privacy.

II. Body

Event 1: It was considered one of the best days in my life because on this day the person I loved got engaged with me.

Event 2: on 8/27/19 the Arthur was so excited that day was full of beautiful surprises.

Event 3: On Tuesday morning at 11:45 pm I had an appointment at the salon to make up my hair style and put Make-up.

Event 4: We took some pictures at the park.

Event 5: Around 11pm the cops arrived because our neighbor called them, and said we were loud .

Event 6: My fiancé went out and talk to the cops, and he told them we almost done.

III. Conclusion

End of the action

The cops were very nice to us, and did not take any action. They just notified us. It was a long day, but we were very happy with my family, relatives and friends. The party lasted about 6 hours. Everyone went home happy and wished us success.

What did you learn from this significant moment?

The narrative was sadly and happily at the same time. I have learned to care about others privacy and beautiful moments are indelible, also there is nothing greater than love and joy always.

For the Week 4 Discussion Board, you will be asked to submit 3 possible topics for essay 1.

Many students begin with a strong idea for their topic selection, and will continue with that topic; however, on occasion, students are not as happy with their topics as they had initially thought they would be. Since it is more difficult to come up with new possibilities when you are feeling under pressure of a deadline coming up, it is good practice to begin with two or three strong topics. It is just like taking a sweater when you are going out in the evening. You won’t need it if you take it, but if you don’t take it, it will probably be the coldest night on record.

I hope you have fun reflecting on the many experiences that make up your life and have made an impact on you! Just as a plant is influenced by the soil and weather in which it thrives, so are we influenced by the events in our live